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Why aren't we allowed to love passionately any more?
It's adolescent, irrational, overly emotional.
Only ever be mildly interested, quite fond.
Well, I'm sorry, but I fell spiralling in love with you.
It inconvenienced me more than it did you.
I didn't plan it, I fought it violently, but it happened none the less.
Full title is 'Don't Blame Me, and I Won't Blame You'.

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bambieyes36 Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011
i LOVE it. its so true.
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nattrozanska Featured By Owner Jan 3, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks so much <3
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Student Writer
Wow! Same thoughts here!! Adults seem to think teens are too full of hormones to truly fall in love!
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knights-on-mares Featured By Owner Jan 14, 2011
The problem with most adults is they forget what it's like to be young.
And some cases falling in love hurt too much that they don't want to remember, because then they start to question what they have settled for...

xXx
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nattrozanska Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Professional Writer
It seems like no one's willing to really admit to being in love these days, which is sad. Suddenly the idea of being independent has taken over, and dependency is seen as weak, which is a real shame, because let's be honest, we don't really have a choice in the matter when it happens, we're just encouraged to be ignore it, for the sake of appearing stronger.
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withinmeloveresides1 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Student Writer
I can see where you're coming from but what I think is that they (whoever they are) want you to be dependent on your lover but not so dependent that you can't make decisions for yourself, that's where being independent steps in
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djinn5454 Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Student General Artist
very well done. dry blunt and to the point. its like a scientific assesment of an issue after the fact. i agree that leaving off where you did adds an awesome suspense feel.
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nattrozanska Featured By Owner Jan 2, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks so much. That's sort of how the piece came about, I was analysing stuff in my head =]
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djinn5454 Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Student General Artist
been looking at your stuff and i like alot of it, just been lazy and havent posted on much. anytime you would like an intellectual sparring match though, please (i implore you) pick a topic and a position (or just a topic is cool) and lets talk. i crave something besides mind-numbing-ness
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nattrozanska Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2011  Professional Writer
Thanks so much, glad you like my stuff =] I would suggest scheduling a 9.30 philosophy chat, but I haven't seen 9.30 for a long time!
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